The Erotic Mind-Control Story Archive

World Writer

Chapter 6 — Tonight

Greg’s day at work was a blur of meetings he didn’t hear and emails he didn’t read. He sat at his desk staring at the same project plan document for three hours, the words and dates swimming in front of him while his mind replayed the morning on a loop — Toni’s mouth on him, the heat of her throat, the way she’d looked up at him with hunger instead of hesitation. And then her voice, low and certain: I want to try that thing I told you about. Tonight.

He’d gone hard just thinking about it. Had to adjust himself in his chair twice before Dave from IT walked over to ask about the server migration and Greg had to pretend he was thinking about network architecture instead of the visual of his wife looking up at him, his cock in her mouth.

Then at 3:55 she sent him a picture of herself taken in a mirror. It didn’t show her head but that was by design. She was wearing a dress he hadn’t seen in years — dark blue, knee-length, with a neckline that showed the tops of her breasts. No text, just the picture.

He left five minutes later. Didn’t tell anyone. Just closed his laptop and walked out.

The drive home took thirty minutes that felt like hours. His hands gripped the steering wheel, his mind running through possibilities — how she’d be when he walked in, whether she’d be nervous now that the reality was hours away, whether she’d changed her mind. The pencil had worked. He knew it had worked. But knowing it logically and feeling it in his gut were two different things.

He pulled into the driveway and killed the engine. The house looked the same as always — the porch light on, the kitchen window glowing, Toni’s car in the driveway. Normal. Except nothing about tonight felt normal.

He walked in and found Toni in the living room, not the kitchen. She was sitting on the couch in that same dress from the picture, but now he got the full effect. She’d done her hair, curled it so it fell past her shoulders. And she was barefoot, her toes pressing into the carpet, waiting.

She stood when he walked in. “You’re early.”

“So are you.” He dropped his bag by the door. “You look —”

“Don’t say nice.”

“Devastating.”

She laughed, soft and nervous, and crossed the room to him. Her heels clicked on the hardwood — she’d put on shoes after all, barely there strappy things that made her legs look longer. She stopped in front of him, close enough that he could smell her perfume, something floral and warm.

“I’ve been thinking about this all day,” she said.

“Me too.”

“I almost asked you to come home early.”

“All you needed to do was send that picture. It was like a sirens’ call.”

She reached up and touched his face, her fingers tracing his jaw. “I’m nervous.”

“Good I am too. That’s the point.”

“Easy for you to say. You’re not the one —” She stopped, shook her head.

“The one what?”

She met his eyes. “The one who has to get on her hands and knees and hope she doesn’t screw it up.”

His chest tightened. He pulled her close, one hand on the small of her back, and kissed her forehead. “You couldn’t screw it up if you tried. We’re just — we’re doing something new. That’s all. There’s no right way.”

She nodded against his chest. “Okay.”

He tipped her chin up and kissed her. Slow, soft, his tongue tracing her lower lip. She opened for him, and the taste of her — coffee and something sweet — made his cock harden instantly. He pressed closer, let her feel it through his pants, and she moaned into his mouth.

“Dinner can wait,” she said against his lips.

“You sure?”

“I haven’t eaten all day. My stomach’s too tight.” She took his hand and pressed it flat against her belly. “Feel.”

He felt it — the slight tremor in her muscles, the tension she was holding. “We don’t have to rush. But I want you to know — I nearly ran a red light on the way home because I couldn’t stop thinking about you in that dress.”

“I want to. I’ve been waiting all day. I don’t want to wait anymore.”

She led him upstairs by the hand. They both made that 3rd step squeak on their way up. Their bedroom looked different in the evening light, the lamp on the nightstand casting warm shadows across the bed. She’d pulled the comforter back, left just the sheets. She’d lit a candle on the dresser — vanilla, something she usually saved for baths.

She turned to face him, and her hands went to the buttons of his shirt. She worked them slowly, one by one, her eyes on her fingers. When she reached the last one, she pushed the fabric off his shoulders and let her hands run down his chest, her fingertips caught his nipples, hardening them.

She pressed a kiss to his sternum. Then lower, over his stomach, her mouth warm and wet. She dropped to her knees and looked up at him, her hands working his belt open, the button of his pants, the zipper.

“I want to taste you again,” she said. “Before.”

“You don’t have to —”

“I want to.”

She pulled his pants and boxers down together, and his cock sprang free, already hard, the tip glistening. She took him in her hand, stroked once, twice, and then opened her mouth and took him deep.

The heat of her throat made his knees weak. He reached down and tangled his hand in her hair, not guiding her, just holding on. She worked him with her mouth and her hand, her tongue tracing the vein along the underside, her cheeks hollowing as she sucked. She looked up at him from her knees, his cock in her mouth, and his whole body tightened.

“I’m not going to last if you keep doing that,” he said.

She pulled off with a wet sound, her lips swollen. “Good. I want you to finish inside me tonight. But first —” She stood, turned, and bent over the edge of the bed.

The dress rode up her thighs as she crawled to the center of the bed, exposing the backs of her legs, the curve of her ass. She looked back at him over her shoulder, her hair falling across her face. “Like this?”

“Exactly like that.”

He moved to the bed and climbed on with her. His hands found her hips, thumbs tracing the waistband of her underwear — black lace, new, something she’d bought for tonight. He hooked his fingers under the fabric and pulled them down, watching the slow reveal of her ass, the dark curls between her legs, the glisten of her cunt in the lamplight.

“Jesus, Toni. You’re already wet.”

She laughed, breathless. “I told you. I’ve been thinking about this all day.”

He knelt behind her and spread her open with his thumbs. Her pussy was pink and slick, her clit swollen, already peeking out from its hood. He leaned in and licked her, flat-tongued, from her entrance to her clit, tasting the salt and sweetness of her arousal.

She gasped and pushed back against his mouth. “Greg —”

He did it again, slower, drawing circles around her clit with the tip of his tongue. Her legs trembled. Her fingers dug into the blanket. He reached up with one hand and pressed two fingers inside her, feeling the heat of her, the way her muscles clenched around him.

“Fuck,” she breathed, the word still feeling foreign to her. “That’s —”

“Good?”

“More. Gimme more”

He kept on. He licked her clit then pulled away, his fingers inside her curled, finding the rough patch of nerves on her front wall, pressing against it rhythmically. Her hips started to move, fucking his fingers, her sounds getting higher and more desperate.

“I’m close,” she said. “I’m so close —”

“Not yet.”

She whined, a sound he’d never heard from her before. “Greg —”

“I want to be inside you when you come.”

He stood and lined himself up behind her. The head of his cock pressed against her wet folds, and he watched himself push forward, watched her pussy open to take him, inch by inch. The heat of her was overwhelming — tight and slick and perfect.

“Oh, fuck,” she said, her voice muffled against the mattress. “You feel — you feel so fucking big.”

He gripped her hips and pushed deeper, buried himself fully inside her. She was stretched around him, her muscles fluttering, her breath coming in short gasps. He stayed still for a moment, letting her adjust, letting himself feel the clench of her cunt around his cock.

“You okay?”

“Yeah.” Her voice was shaky. “Yeah. Fuck. Move. Please.”

He pulled out slow, almost all the way, and pushed back in. The sound of their bodies meeting — wet and intimate — filled the room. He set a rhythm, slow at first, deep and deliberate, watching his cock slide into her, watching her ass press against his hips with each thrust.

“Look at you,” he said. “Taking my cock like this.”

She moaned, pushed back against him. “More.”

“More what?”

“Faster. Harder.”

He gave her what she asked for. Grabbed her hips, his fingers digging in and set a punishing pace, the slap of skin against skin sharp and loud. She cried out, her fingers twisting in the sheets, and he watched himself fuck her from behind, watched the way her body opened for him, the way she took every inch without hesitation.

“This is it,” he said, his voice rough. “so fucking tight. So wet. You have no idea how long I’ve wanted to see you like this.”

“I wish you’d told me.” she gasped. “I wish — I would’ve done this sooner —”

“We’re doing it now.”

“Yeah. Fuck. Yeah.”

He reached around and found her clit, his fingers wet with her slick. He circled it in time with his thrusts. Her whole body jerked. She cried out, a sound that was almost a scream, and he felt her start to clench around him, her orgasm building.

“Come with me,” he said. “Come on my cock.”

“I’m — I’m going to —”

“Do it. Now.”

She came with a sob, her body convulsing around him, her cunt gripping him so tight he saw stars. She kept moving, kept fucking back against him through it, and the sight of her coming apart on his cock pushed him over the edge.

“I’m coming,” he said. “Fuck, Toni —”

He buried himself deep and let go, his orgasm ripping through him, hot and relentless. He felt himself pulse inside her, felt her still clenching around him, milking every drop. He kept thrusting, shallow and desperate, until he was empty and shaking.

He pulled out slowly, watching his cum leak out of her, watching her muscles flutter around nothing. She collapsed onto the bed, face-down, her dress still bunched around her waist.

He lay down beside her, pulled her against his chest. She turned into him, her face pressed into his neck, her body still trembling.

“That was —” she started.

“Yeah.”

“I didn’t know it could be like that.”

He kissed her forehead, her temple, the corner of her mouth. “Neither did I.”

She tilted her head up and looked at him, her eyes glassy and satisfied. “I want to do that again.”

“Right now?”

She laughed, exhausted. “Ten minutes?”

He held her tighter, his hand resting on the curve of her hip, and felt something shift in his chest — something that felt like hope. He thought about the pencil downstairs, and the changes still to come, and how much more of her there was still to discover.

Ten minutes later, she rolled on top of him and proved she meant what she’d said.