Reader’s Picks: Tom
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Congratulations to MCStories on lasting 30 years and thanks to Daphne, Simon, and everyone else who has held the Website together for all these years!
With that out of the way, I’d like to note that there were lots of male dominated stories throughout 30 years of MCStories, but a mere fraction of them were female dominated stories. Among those a larger percentage of those are lesbian oriented. And among the hetero-ish submissions even fewer really add more than the obligatory and much loved descriptive set-up, to control, and ending in climax. I just wanted to point out some stories that showed both the protagonist, and the author who writes about them, put in the extra thought and effort into getting what they wanted literarily and literally. And what they want is usually a bit on the dark side and creatively perverse. I’ll go in descending order from naughty to nice.
Alex’s Surrender, by wxyz, tells the story of a man who visits a dominatrix to explore his fetish and gets taken by the dominatrix to meet her desires. She works on him meticulously day after day. The hypnosis script is curt but involved overall. Chapter 4 where she cunningly manuevers around Alex’s psychological roadblock to get what she wants is creative, insightful, and shows extra thought and effort. The author had written a lot more elaboration on the hypno scenes and loads of other details but because the story was over 40,000 words (which is roughly half of a paperback novel) a lot was left on the proverbial editing room floor. I can only urge that the original be submitted and say, “Bravo!“
Doggies Make Good Maids by Adam Lily is the story of a benevolent, loving, and thoughtul, yet decidely kinky wife with a strong libido, She hypnotizes her husband and shares him freely with her friend—in this case a female one, but in other stories male ones (she’s equal opportunity). While I would have enjoyed more elaboration on the hypnosis, there was thoughtful and intelligent work put in by both the author and impliedly by the main protagonist in the story. Both I think have a true ion for their sexual fantasies.
Emily and Jack Explore Hypnosis, by jackandjill00000 is the story of a wife slowly and surreptitiously hypnotizing her husband over countless number of days to mold the relationship inorder to fulfill her desires—to live her best life.
Quarantine Life by Jukebox (aka the Mcstories MVP) is a stunning realistic (almost autobiographial/biographical) of yet another somewhat more benevolent wife putting in the time and hard work to not only live her best life but to fully monitize it as well. It was told from the 3rd person perspective as oppossed to Jukebox’s more usual 1st person, which we all know and love. It needed a lot of context and covered the year’s time of the Pandemic, so it’s understandable. I would have liked a chapter for each month of the year, or at least a chapter for each of the four seasons, but Jukebox is a busy author and prefers the one and done kind of stories.
In Going Down by Archibael the protagonist realizes that she can hypnotize her husband and all the implications of that start to change her in the “power corrupts”—kind-of-situation she finds herself in. I really enjoyed how well the author got across what it is that arouses the two main protagonists so much—both conceptually mentally, and how that manifested sexually.. While I would have loved the “wrong and dirty voice” to be fleshed out more... alas no. Archibael is a “Story First; Bow Chicka Wow Wow Second author”. So with that caveat I recommed this story.
The Further Adventures of Louis and Elle by Argos has the most angelic of protagonists (and possibly of authors?). The hypnosis is thoughtful and solid. The big draw for me is that I’m a sucker for a love story. It portrays a broad full life together for a fem dom and her male sub. Only mildly perverse with some sex, so not everyone’s cup of tea, but I liked the story. The prequel Love, Honor, and Obey, can be a bit heavy at times, but if you like The Further Aventures Of Louis and Elle then you can look back at the prior origin story.