Reader’s Picks: The Mother Of Invention
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I’ve been a writer all my life and I appreciate good writing. Show, don’t tell. Get us engaged with the character (by getting them into trouble), so we respond emotionally to what’s happening to them.
I often like stories featuring the (usually) woman being controlled as the protagonist. What is it like from her point of view?
I also like stories where the protagonist (usually a guy) doesn’t have control, because someone else does, or an unreliable device does, or something like that. There are even stories I really like where the protagonist isn’t too bright, and they don’t realize what’s going on.
In general, I love stories featuring lack of clarity about what’s going on. I love amnesia, for example.
I don’t particularly like stories featuring a big, powerful guy in charge, and I despise stories where the controlling happens quickly at the beginning, gets taken for granted, etc.
Picks:
Why Not? By Morris 666 (from 2001. I’ve been on the site a long time now!)
Jenna (a college student home for the holidays) decides to go along with her little brother’s idea and let him try to hypnotise her. Of course it doesn’t work ;) Told from Jenna’s point of view, as she continues from one debacle to the next. There’s no actual sex in the story—I think Morris intended to continue it?—but plenty of humiliation, and a grossly inappropriate orgasm.
Welcome to Typing School and We Need To Talk About Bubbles by Hypnobubbles
Who knew comedy and embarrassment could be so erotic?
The 8-Ball by Dogdog
The concept behind this story is an exact copy of Momdified (see below), but when I asked Dogdog about this, he said, “Who?” So maybe lightning struck twice. Anyway, I love it, even though Dogdog is hopelessly self-indulgent (use the page-down key to skip the parts about the aliens), because he’s also a master of characterization, and specifically our hero, Ryan. Ryan reaches the highest heights of immaturity—and he’ll take you with him!
Another story based on the relationship between an immature son who uses an unreliable device to control an authoritative, strict mother with big boobs. Shadebalan is apparently not a native speaker of English (I guess he’s Chinese?), because he later enlisted a native speaker to help him write Re-momdified—but what the latter gains in fluency, it loses in authenticity. Stick to the original.
Diet (Pan) by Pan
Longtime visitors to mcstories will be familiar with Pan. Pan knows a lot about people, and his protagonist Daniel does, too. He’s a fount of insights into the psychology of his strict mother and condescending sister, and uses all of them to control them, gradually reducing them (over the course of some 30 chapters) to little more than playthings. One of Pan’s cruel stories.
The Most Beautiful Thing by bzlurker
A lovely story about a dumb protagonist with a gorgeous penis. His mom, his aunt and his girlfriend would be in charge every detail of his life…except that they can’t resist him when they can see it. It’s just as well he never catches on.
Fugue is another author with a lighter touch. The things in his stories which force the characters to follow instructions from others are rarely under anyone’s control—or if they are, the someone is probably pretty foolish. Heavy Petting features a pair of friends, one male, one female, who discover that many women in their area have been conditioned to follow instructions from anyone who grabs their breasts.