Reader’s Picks: Mouse
Greetings. I am Mouse, a long-time reader of stories on mcstories and online roleplayer. This was quite the difficult task for me to take on. Having read so many stories on here over the years, narrowing it down to a reasonable list was next to impossible. I’ve definitely left out some amazing stories. I prefer “bad endings”, humiliation, role reversal, bimbofication, and bondage, among a vast variety of other things. I have tried to highlight stories that others haven’t, as there are many outstanding works by talented authors deserving the spotlight.
This is the first story I ever read here and it still is an all-time favorite. Amazing role-reversal and slow changes, slowly corrupting the main character over time. It hints at hypnosis rather that just blatantly using it. And it presses heavily on the humiliation side of things.
Accidental loss of control to a rival, who takes full advantage. Excellent use of the power, wonderful blackmail, and I love the ending. It’s another story that uses hypnosis to power other kinks instead of simply overwriting the victim.
Who’s Your Daddy? by New Before Old
Superheroines, time travel, reality manipulation, all well done in this story. This one includes bimbofication and incest eventually. I love the little stumbles as the past changes, discussing new memories each time.
A Bad Game of Pool by pupphammond
I am not really big on the mm side of stories, but this one is an exception. The concept is wonderful and the way the pool table is utilized, the way the changes are made, is perfect. Even if male on male isn’t your thing, the first chapter doesn’t contain any but does contain an excellent premise, idea, and the changes that are so much fun.
I will always love the idea of someone’s body moving before their brain and react, or against their own will. This story uses dog commands at first and escalates fairly quickly. Not quite puppy play and no bondage here, but the story gets me going every time.
Two highschooler seniors run afoul of a magical game that gets out of hand quickly. New rules that cannot be ignored, and escalating humiliation that test the limits of friendship.
This is a fall from grace story, someone in power losing that power and being humiliated in the process. Jukebox has been a staple in the scene for years now and this is one of my favorites of theirs. I definitely considered a few others from them, so take a look at their catalog if you like this one.
I really love everything CactusJuggler has written and certainly considered others, but this one has a wonderful concept that deserves recognition. A story about a story that changes an editor who reads it. One could classify this as a fall from grace story as well, though maybe not with the same level of humiliation that most of listed stories have.
Plain White Tank Top by checker
A magical shirt that allows viewers of a stream to donate money and display things on it, things that come true about the wearer. Well paced, bimbofication is well done, and good finish.
Compound Interest by JoeForest
Bimbofication in a fantasy world at its finest. A poor decision in the past comes back to haunt a very long-lived character. Always read the fine print and close out your s in a timely manner. Additionally, everything JoeForest puts out is worth reading in my opinion.