Reader’s Picks: ExxZee
About me: I’ve been reading mcstories since very early on, and I’m surprised it’s still going after all these years. I still open up the What’s New page every Saturday to see the new material. By this point it’s not just a treasure of the erotic fiction community but of the very web itself. The feelings and fetishes mcstories has nurtured has meant a lot to me. I haven’t been able to play out these feelings at all in wretched real life, for I don’t live in an area where that is possible, but here I can indulge them without fear.
An unusual story for the site, although the mind control is readily apparent, its implications are a bit of a slow boil. The characters are “Altered,” their thoughts and actions able to be put under computer control, but for most of the story the effects are just to compel them to follow the rules of a series of laser tag scenarios. It turns out characters don’t have to be permanently made into domestic slaves or hive drones in order for their control to be really erotic.
A short but extremely brutal and effective story where a nameless male protagonist wakes up being absolutely, desperately controlled... to perform a strict workout routine? The extreme depth of his enthrallment is expressed powerfully.
trilby else is a legend on this site, and everything they wrote is incredibly hot. Trinkets is probably the one they authored that I think about the most, about women who go on a cruise that brainwashes them, in the hottest way possible, into being simple, easily controlled tribeswomen. It isn’t very understanding of real native cultures, but then the tribe is entirely fictional, and there is something about imagining being one of the women that is fascinating. An all-timer.
I’m shocked this was written in 2003, I was sure it was written in the early 2010s. A camper in the woods finds a mysterious structure where he spots his girlfriend undergoing the first stages of being converted into a mindless drone and being taken down into a hive. He decides to rescue her by putting on and activating the very same kind of apparatus he just saw beginning to transform her and going in to infiltrate the hive. Predictably it doesn’t go well for him (what is he even thinking?? well not a lot now!), but that’s the point isn’t it?