The Erotic Mind-Control Story Archive

[Ivy Comment: ....I’m curious but also....nah, never mind.]

[Hypnotist Reply: No! Just…. No!]

[Random seriously unstructured banter that even though I was in the chat I still don’t know what half the people were saying.]

[Sleepygirl Comment: it’s less fun if you understand what’s happening]

[Hypnotist’s Reply: Task failed successfully!]

[Princess Comment: I had a feeling this was gonna come back and be turned on me. BUT it was quite entertaining watching it on the others. Call and response is always fun]

[Hypnotist’s Note: Adding a trigger into the script I think will help not only get the girls down more quickly but the viewers of the videos]

[Ivy Reply: Devious, I like it.]

[Ivy Comment: You have NO idea how true this is.]

[Hypnotist’s Comment: I have worked in an office you know.]

[Sleepygirl Comment: while i realize we’re going for sexy here, business casual at work for me is basically jeans and a sweater…]

[Princess Comment: To perhaps help out with your cover image, I saw myself in navy slacks, white button down blouse with a cross tie, sweater-vest that matches the slacks, and low white heels]

[Psyco Comment: I have used all of my strength to avoid white collar and/or business attire so my brain went very boring and just made it a knee length pencil skirt and a light green button down.]

[Hypnotist’s Comment: To facilitate me taking some much needed time off, I had already finished the cover by the time they had commented on it, but you can at least appreciate what they were wearing. As a completely pointless side note, I spent my entire career as a computer tech, until I was fired in 2020 and I started doing this. There is nothing more bafflingly stupid than crawling under a desk to fix a pc while in dress slacks and a white collar shirt, but yet EVERY company I worked for always made the grunts follow the business dress code because we were technically corporate employees. Mind bogglingly stupid shit.]

[Ivy Comment: or, in my case, as close as it’s going to get for daily work.]

[Ivy Comment: That was QUICK]

[Psyco Comment: I was tired that day. Not a lot of resistance rollin’ about in my noggin. ^^;]

[Psyco Comment: Broke into hives simply thinking about heels. They are the worst.]

[Hypnotist’s Comment: I struggle to even fathom what Psyco might look like in heels.]

[Hypnotist’s Note: Good to have a baseline, All four are about the same for them, just kind of relaxed and focused, not super deep, not compliant or anything just… ready to go deeper.]

[Sleepygirl Comment: (specifically to the phrase “Not compliant”) yet]

[Ivy Comment: Bring it on, hypno boy!!!]

[Hypnotist Reply: Bring it, I shall/]

[Ivy Comment: Not ominous at ALL]

[Hypnotist’s Note: the person in question is a character on Second Life called Vallarie Dypsove. And was used with their permission. However it’s left vague so the viewer / reader can add whomever they want into the fantasy.]

[Psyco Comment: It’s the ambient aura that makes Vallarie so successful.]

[Ivy Comment: That’s one of the most arousing things you’ve ever said]

[Hypnotist’s Note: I’m not sure if square up means the same to her as it does to me, but the idea of Psyco wanting to brawl with everyone in the office as they leave is very on brand.]

[Psyco Comment: Square up means the same up north. Stand on business, toe to toe with whomever challenges me. Business casual apparently makes me more fighty then usual I guess. >.>]

[Princess Reply: It’s the frustration of having to be in heels and restrictive clothing. It must be released in some way. And if you gotta swing on someone...well then that’s what you gotta do]

[Hypnotist’s Reply: I may never get the image of Psyco trying to fight everyone in an office as they try to leave work out of my head. I literally laughed at this for like 20 minutes and had to explain the context to my wife because she couldn’t figure out why I was gasping for air.]

[Sleepygirl Comment: i don’t know how to take that : ]

[Princess Reply: Yeah, it definitely deserves being noted, but words do fail me as to how to note it]

[Ivy Reply: Seeing as it’s been 4 years, 5 months...yeah, you bet you can predict us :D ]

[Hypnotist’s Reply: Of course Ivy has it down to the month. But as I think of these things it’s always fun to just watch their different personalities and different ways or reacting to things unfold. Even down to Psyco’s tendency to choose violence by default despite being very ive and sweet 99% of the time, is just really fun to watch.]

[Ivy Comment: THAT’S not hard :D ]

[Psyco Comment: Short queens unite! ...Then we’ll be the same height as everyone else, I’ll be the base. ]

[Sleepygirl Comment: didn’t think of that but yeah it would not be hard to be taller than...apparently most of us ]

[Hypnotist’s Note: The tallest member of the subject’s group is Princess, who by memory is roughly 5’10”, the same as me. None of us are really what I’d consider to be ‘tall.’ BUT, since this is designed to be used to make a video to go up on my youtube channel, Hypnotic Experiences, and the MASSIVE bulk of my viewers are male ( 70% the last time I checked) and at least one of them has commented that they are very tall, I wanted to make it seem like compared to the person in the script, what the girls were envisioning and Vallarie, but others would just envision as someone else, I wanted to give the impression that they were imposing, and looking down the viewer, making them feel small, and therefore a little bit more helpless.]

[Ivy Comment: ...you sure about that? ]

[Psyco Comment: ...Moving right along. ]

[Hypnotist’s Reply: Psycho is the shortest of the group by the way, and the shortest person I know, which makes her tendency to resort to violence, and to usually come out on top even more amusing to me.]

[Princess Comment: This was my absolute immediate reaction, but the follow up, gotta say was top notch]

[Ivy Reply: Same, it’s instinct.]

[Sleepygirl Comment: that’s a sure fire way to succeed with the seduction…]

[Ivy Comment: See, this is why I suspect this is NOT our first rodeo with this manager....they just KNOW what to say to get us riiiiiight where they want us.]

[Hypnotist’s Reply: Given that I was basing this on actual logs with Vallarie, and Ivy is one of the girls that has had an encounter with Vallarie this is probably why this feels familiar, but the implication is that the ‘manager’ knows this is going to work on you.]

[Ivy Comment: ............oh, I’m not making it through this log, am I..... ]

[Psyco Reply: It’s okay hun, none of us are.]

[Sleepygirl Reply: that’s a resounding nope]

[Hypnotist’s Comment: That is one of the most fun things about these logs, and why I like having them go through and comment, watching them drop while they read the log that has already dropped them.]

[Ivy Comment: Keeping it cool, aren’t you, me?]

[Hypnotist’s Note: the rather seductive and compelling nature of the ‘manager’ here is one of those things I’ve found to be really effective on both men and women. Someone that is confident and yet alluring just seems to make others do what they say, at least in this fetish community. Also, yeah Psyco is gone, and the other three aren’t far behind.]

[Princess Comment: As if our reactions in this weren’t enough to confirm this statement…]

[Sleepygirl Comment: now my shoulders actively dropping while reading that]

[Ivy Comment: ....enthralled ]

[Hypnotist’s comment: the word Enthralled is one that both I and Vallarie tend to use with out subjects.]

[Ivy Comment: yessss....I mean, did you SEE that last paragraph...WHOW!!!!]

[Hypnotist’s Note: Well, if they weren’t gone before they certainly are now, Three misspellings and a ‘yes master’. My work here is done. **checks log page count** or not.]

[Ivy Reply: You BET you’re not, get back in there, you!!]

[Ivy Comment: Which isn’t easy, bravo though it adds to my head canon that this has happened before.]

[Hypnotist’s Note: Won’t be long until all four are at the ‘master’ level of trance, which seems to kick in around 1000 or so for Ivy and Princess, and around 1,000,000 for Sleepygirl.]

[Princess Reply: Look at you paying attention to our very varied scales. It does seem mine and Ivy’s have synced up. Don’t think that’s always been the case.]

[Ivy Comment: I’ve no idea but it’s fun to see!]

[Hypnotist’s Reply: Not really, a 1000 for Ivy is not really as deep as 730 is for you. The numbers are similar but the actual depth is not the same. And yes… I do know how to read all of these by heart. And yes, it is confusing as hell to do so in real time.]

[Sleepygirl Comment: i do love that image…]

[Psyco Comment: Yeah~ @.@ ]

[Hypnotist’s Reply: I know thats why I used it = ]

[Ivy Comment: Excellent detail, I love it when it’s so easy to visualize.]

[Sleepygirl Reply: i feel like i’ve also actively done that at some point in my desk chair…]

[Hypnotist’s Reply: Again both reasons why I put it in there = ]

[Ivy Comment: Ah, “duties as assigned” has never looked soooo good.]

[Psyco Comment: Welp, these lines nearly got me again in the read over.]

[Sleepygirl Reply: solidarity

[Hypnotist’s note: and Sleepygirl is down.]

[Sleepygirl Comment: that didn’t take long]

[Psyco Comment: I’ve gotten to the point where I’m repeating commands. There is no going back. >.< ]

[Psyco Comment: I’ve always had an issue with staircases being used in inductions since my staircase has eleven stairs. If I wasn’t ten sheets to the wind by this point I might not have sank as deep as quickly.]

[Hypnotist’s Note: For those of you playing the home game… in this situation where someone tells you something like this… what do you do with that information? Well… the next time you use a staircase deepener on her… you make sure it has 11 stairs. That not only removes the resistance but makes it more personal for her while being completely natural to everyone else, and ensures they will all drop like rocks into a pond.]

[Princess Comment: Simple, straight forward countdown, very effective, 10/10]

[Sleepygirl Reply: would recommend]

[Ivy Comment: And there’s all the validation you’re going to need!]

[Hypnotist’s Note: and Ivy is down…]

[Sleepygirl Comment: aaaaand here we go pushing my buttons already]

[Ivy Comment: Those two final lines....shiver!]

[Psyco Reply:: Yep, now I need to put on new shorts.]

[Hypnotist’s Reply: LOL!]

[Sleepygirl Comment: if i have something about being a good pet stuck in my head for the rest of the night...i blame you]

[Ivy Comment: There you have it, reader, a declaration if I’ve ever heard one.]

[Ivy Comment: Mmmhhhmmm, perfectly normal for a Tuesday at the office :D ]

[Hypnotist’s Reply: We did this on a friday = ]

[Hypnotist’s Note: and Princess is down. I should note that the idea of calling them ‘my pet’ comes directly from the second life character of Vallarie, who calls everyone that is hypnotized ‘her little pet’. Or something along those lines.]

[Sleepygirl Comment: and clearly it works very well]

[Ivy Comment: Yeah, I’ve seen her use variation of it, depending on the situation, that’s pretty much it.]

[Psyco Reply: She usually calls me Darling]

[Sleepygirl Reply: I’ve been called both]

[Ivy Comment: and cue my swoon.]

[Ivy Comment: I really liked this part, defining the differences between the two words so very well.]

[Ivy Comment: THERE IT IS! ]

[Ivy Comment: Showing how well tamed and trained we are, huh, me :D ]

[Hypnotist’s note: This is what I refer to as a ‘Call and Response’ trigger. The hypnotist says something, it has an effect on the person and they reply to it. You see it a lot with the ‘you are a girl’ trigger that I will use, when they see that they reply with ‘Girl’s are meant to be hypnotized’ or something along those lines (I encourage them to personalize it to suit their own interest.) This one is again straight from Vallarie and I really like it as a call and response, it does a great job of having the person not only sink but it outwardly to the hypnotized, to themself, and to anyone around them that they are in fact ‘Hypnotized’ and the act of doing that serves a reinforcement function and helps them to drop more deeply because they have itted it. ]

[Sleepygirl Comment on ‘Call and Reponse’ triggers: and as a personal opinion, they are sexy as hell]

[Ivy Comment: Button button button BUTTON]

[Hypnotist’s Comment: I know this is one of the things that really gets people in general, a feeling of being where you belong, like this is right somehow… it’s specifically something that Ivy really likes so I try to add it into the sessions regularly.]

[Hypnotist’s Note: So much fun to read that isn’t it? Four lovely young women all responding in trance letting everyone know they are hypnotized… this also serves to deepen the others as if one person is hypnotized the others will subconsciously think “oh… it’s working, am I hypnotized? Should I be?” and down they go. So delightfully devious.]

[Sleepygirl Comment: you? devious? i’m shocked]

[Sleepygirl Comment: this little addition worked well in knocking me down a few more pegs]

[Psyco Comment: Love having my brain fully silenced, it is a rare happenstance. One of the main things that led me to this kink in particular.]

[Hypnotist’s Comment: Not and uncommon thing to hear, people have busy lives, it’s nice to have a moment of calm and quiet. And this, with practice, can help.]

[Ivy Comment: This is a runner up for the most arousing thing you’ve ever written, just behind the line I highlighted above.]

[Hypnotist’s Comment: This is a side of me I don’t get to show very often. Most of my trances focus on action and fetish kinks involving sleep and hypnosis… this is more… domination. This side of me scares me… power corrupts…. And absolute power corrupts absolutely… but it rocks absolutely too. So I am torn.]

[Psyco comment: Being both trained and tamed. >////< ]

[Sleepygirl Comment: i am hypnotized]

[Hypnotist’s Reply: Was wondering when this would start happening in the commentary. It actually took longer than I expected… but yet… here we are!]

[Princess Comment: Spelling, this word specifically, was kicking my tail]

[Hypnotist’s Comment: It is a hard word to spell after all = ]

[Ivy Comment: Quite impressive, me!]

[Hypnotist’s Note: And… They’re out!]

[Ivy Comment: Take your bow, you’ve earned it :D ]

[Hypnotist’s Reply: I’m working, no time!]

[Sleepygirl Comment: i am hypnotized..]

[Psyco Comment: I am hypnotized.]

[Hypnotist’s Note: Yes… the girls are hypnotized while reading the log file… Yes… this was intentional… Why do you ask?]

[Hypnotist’s note: I’m actually proud of how well this managed to hit all of them. I was a bit leery going into this trance session because I was feeling… ‘odd’ like I was about to get sick but just never ended up getting sick. I was worried it would throw me off my game. It did not.]