Eclipse Into Darkness
Chapter 1 — Lightfall
The city glowed beneath her like a constellation built by the blind. Streets pulsed with manufactured peace. Towers reached toward the sky in arrogant symmetry. From the highest rooftop in New Lysoria, Madame Eclipse watched, a figure carved from shadow and silk.
Her coat, deep violet and silver, fluttered gently in the wind, her eyes deep silver and merciless.
“They call this order,” she murmured. “But it’s an illusion. A shell built on worship. They don’t need protection. They need purpose. Control. A shepherd…”
She spread her arms slightly, as if to embrace the skyline.
“And I will give it to them...”
Below, the world still adored its champions.
Solarian and Lady Veil—married heroes, beloved icons—moved through the city like gods. Murals bore their faces. Crowds parted for them. Their mantra was etched in glowing banners across municipal towers:
“Truth, Light, and Healing.”
He burned like daybreak; she moved like dusk. Yin and yang. Husband and wife.
Ethan Vale, radiant and broad-shouldered, wielded light itself—his suit of red and gold shone with refracted energy, sunburst insignia glowed with every breath. He flew with impossible grace, formed hard-light constructs with a thought, and could absorb enough damage to bring down buildings.
Celeste Vale, delicate but unyielding, was grace wrapped in empathy. Her armor shimmered in golden hues, her movements more dance than combat. She could absorb the pain of others—physical and emotional—draw it into herself and heal others, and herself. Her shields were seamless. Her telekinetic ability was subtle but growing.
Together they create a powerful synergy, with Solarian generating a burst of searing light to disorient enemies, while Lady Veil telekinetically disables some weapons, or empathically reaches foes to have them cease in their efforts. Lady Veil could project an empathic force field around a group of civilians, while Solarian could form solid light constructs to push back collapsing debris or enemies, stronger than any umbrella ever created.
They also work together through injury- creating a Healshock Pulse. When Solarian is wounded, Veil can channel her empathy directly into him, instantly stabilizing him. He, in turn, magnifies the empathic energy into a shockwave of light to drive enemies back as he heals.
The couple are also always in constant communication, often with minimal words — a glance, a nod, a coordinated move, each knowing what to do.
Solarian had often said, “I’ll draw their fire. You protect the people...”
Lady Veil usually replied with, “As always, my light...”
Unlike others, the pair takes time after battles to help rebuild, check in with local communities, and reassure survivors, with Lady Veil known to stay hours after a battle, offering comfort to grieving families or visiting children in hospitals. Solarian mentors young aspiring men and women interested in law enforcement at the Lysoria Academy of Justice, teaching control and discipline.
The romantic bond between Solarian and Lady Veil is legendary —they are often seen holding hands during interviews, standing united in parades, and defending each other fiercely when questioned.
Their media coverage had been lengthy and pure- including “The Lightfall Incident” where Solarian held up a collapsing bridge with his powers while Veil personally evacuated every last civilian or “The Night of Cinders” when arsonists lit half the city ablaze, Lady Veil used her shields to contain the spread, while Solarian flew through the inferno to rescue trapped victims.
Their legend was cemented in an early talk show interview. When asked why they fight together, Solarian replied “Lady Veil reminds me why the light matters. I shine so she has a world worth protecting.”
Saccharine sweet. But accurate to their reality.
Together, they were everything the city believed in.
Then, the disappearances began.
The very first vanishing was quiet. Solitary. A tech genius. The disappearance was sudden. Clean.
No blood. No struggle. No trace.
Just... absence.
The disappearance site was underground- a remnant of days gone by from warring that created a necessity to hide well below the city’s surface.
Dim lights flickered overhead, dust floated in the air like old ghosts of those bygone days. Solarian’s boots echoed against dusty concrete walkways as they descended deep under the city, looking for any clue as they moved.
Lady Veil followed a step behind, fingertips brushing along the peeling wall as if trying to feel something beyond sight.
Her expression was tight. Pale. Unsettled. Confused.
“All the energy readings converge here,” Lady Veil said. “But there’s no empathic trace, I am not getting any sign…”
Veil closed her eyes and reached out with her empathic sense—normally her most potent gift.
But tonight, it faltered.
The underground cold pressed into her bones. The air pressure was wrong—too heavy, too still. She drew in a breath, expecting to feel residual emotion, fear, pain, anything from the disappeared tech guru.
Nothing.
She opened her eyes, breath unsteady.
“There’s no psychic residue,” she whispered. “It’s like... the moment was erased. Or hidden.”
Solarian looked over, and asked “You alright?”
Veil didn’t answer, instead turned her head sharply. She felt something. A prickle on the edge of her senses. Like a hand brushing her shoulder. Like someone watching.
She looked behind her.
Veil saw only shadow.
But the feeling pulsed. Moved. And for a heartbeat, it seemed to breathe.
She froze.
“What is it?” Solarian asked.
“Nothing, Solarian, just a chill…” Lady Veil replied. “How far below ground are we here?”
Unseen, embedded within the void between cold concrete, utility pipes and hanging cables, Madame Eclipse stood perfectly still, veil drawn, breath silent. Her gift for concealment in the shadows was perfect in environments like this. She didn’t just blend in—she bled into the dark. She was the dark. And in this place, her most dangerous tools worked best.
“Three stories,” Solarian replied.
“The cold and the air pressure below ground is causing my abilities to be limited…” Veil said.
The pressure dampened empathic scanning. The cold slowed nervous reactions. Veil’s powers were dulled. Her defenses lowered. Eclipse was setting the ground rules for a dangerous game.
And her thoughts... became vulnerable as frustration and confusion reigned.
Eclipse’s voice didn’t need to be spoken, it hung in the air.
It simply slithered in, wrapping around the edges of Veil’s consciousness like a single, silky violet colored thread as the heroine struggled with her abilities. While she didn’t hear it consciously, she felt it. And Lady Veil simply wrote it off to frigid temperatures and air pressure. But it was there, just for Lady Veil’s subconscious to absorb.
“Maybe the city needs more than protection... it needs control.”
“Maybe some people aren’t meant to choose... not if their choices lead to chaos.”
“Maybe there are stronger mental powers than yours…”
Each phrase was a wispy, imperceptible pulse that could be explained as a chill, embedded into the psychic field through scent, vibration, and mental rhythm—crafted to by Veil’s weakened defenses and nestle unseen just on the inside of her subconscious. There, but out of reach.
Veil blinked, her breath shallow.
For a moment, she felt… calm. A peace she couldn’t explain. Face blank, unseen, her back to her husband.
“And so it begins,” Eclipse thought to herself in the shadows. “Well done, Lady Veil…”
Then Lady Veil shook her head, as if trying to shake something. But she found nothing to shake off. .
“Something’s wrong?” Solarian asked, concern on his face.
Lady Veil did not immediately answer, her face a cross of calmness, lost in thought with a hint of confusion.
Something inside her whispered again, and she wasn’t sure where that voice was coming from.
“It’s just the cold…” Veil replied, giving an explanation.
From the shadows, Eclipse watched with a smile only she could see. She didn’t need to strike now. She only needed to be ed. And then forgotten.
A command whispered in the dark by Eclipse ended that silky, violet thread that had begun weaving into Lady Veil’s mind:
:
“ the moment of calm… and the need to hear more…to feel calm…”
And with a swirl of mist and shadow, Eclipse vanished into the shadows.
Solarian looked at Lady Veil with concern, she had never been unable to feel anything as an empath. They both were concerned. They had nothing to go on to solve the disappearance.
The next day, another disappearance at the exact same place.
“Solarian, to maximize our efforts, you should interview the guards up top and the security camera footage at security while I go to the disappearance site,” Veil said, the tactical genius. “I don’t want to run a risk of any outside readings empathically and should be able to complete scans before the cold gets to me too deeply.”
In reality, Lady Veil, the tactical one, was concerned she wouldn’t be able to find any psychic or empathic remnants, and did not want Solarian to see her frustration.
“Copy that, Lady Veil,” Solarian said as they made their way to the same site as the day before.
The pair split after Solarian looked for information as he went with Lady Veil to the location of the latest victim before breaking off to chat with the guards placed in the tunnels, then the security camera team, then the guards up top at the entryway. New Lysoria had increased security at this site, but that was fruitless.
Lady Veil searched the cold, dimly lit tunnel. From the shadows, Eclipse watched, then breathed out, sending a pulse of scent, laced with her pheromones.
Veil froze in mid-step. Her breath caught momentarily.
“Maybe the city needs more than protection... it needs control,” whispered Eclipse from the dark, sending the violet strand of silky thought into the subconscious of the beautiful married superheroine.
Veil felt something, again, and turned, but no one was there. She saw only shadow. She shivered.
More wisps from the powerful Eclipse. Violet silk wisps softly reinforcing the message nestled in her subconscious, just a touch out of sight.
“Maybe some people aren’t meant to choose... not if their choices lead to chaos.”
“Maybe there are stronger mental powers than yours…”
Eclipse repeated the phrases for as long as Veil was alone. She smiled, knowing she was playing the long game with the empath, whose abilities were weakened by design in a game only the Violet clad shadow hider knew had begun.
In New Lysoria, there was a disappearance a day. Each day, for seven days, the investigation was the same for Solarian and Veil. The diabolical Eclipse continued the messages to Veil as their investigations ended with the same results. None.
On day 8, Eclipse started a deeper theme, adding a new silky strand in her messaging to the subconscious of Lady Veil, a darker shade this time.
“Control is preferred to chaos…”
Veil shivered at the new wispy strand, and was brought back to thought when Solarian used his communicator to ask on progress.
“Nothing new, Solarian, heading topside now…” Veil said, frustrated.
As she walked up the dusty concrete, she turned to look for someone. But she only saw shadow.
Back at their top floor penthouse, the hero couple had a discussion about progress.
“This is so frustrating, Lady Veil,” Solarian said.
“I know, my light… imagine my frustration that there should be empathic remnants and I can’t get a single reading…” Lady Veil said, visibly distressed.
Solarian was not used to seeing Lady Veil show this emotion.
The Madame was diabolically playing the long game, orchestrating and persuading emotional stressors to destabilize Lady Veil. For the first time, failure to figure out these disappearances had citizens wondering about their heroes, becoming frustrated by the super couple’s inability to stop the vanishings. And then every day, a new disappearance. Which further distressed the heroes.
Lady Veil started sleeping less, meditating more, and began to slowly pull away from Solarian emotionally, in her own personal malaise. Solarian let it linger, believing she needed space to clear her mind and deal with her growing frustrations and to sort out her self doubt. But he would not let it continue for much longer.
Madame Eclipse was orchestrating everything, and now was ready to fuel another fire.
“I have information on the disappearances and regarding the heroes…”
That was the simple message sent to the budding star of New Lysoria’s most watched news station by Eclipse. The Violet and silver clad Madame smiled, looking at the screen where the beautiful newswoman, Vanessa Pryce, held court at her news desk. Polished, strong, noble.
“You, my dear, have the pulse of the people…” Eclipse said to herself with a smile.
Wind stirred the sheer curtains of the rooftop canopy, billowing like breath from something unseen. Moonlight shimmered off black crystal candleholders, each flame flickering within pools of wax scented with jasmine, rich food, and something unplaceable, soft, smoky, and impossible to resist at the first class restaurant. Vanessa’s senses were taking it all in.
Vanessa Pryce, star journalist, former Miss New Lysoria, made her way to where the mysterious figure cloaked in tailored shadows, silver, and violet sat.
“Your curiosity has you wondering,” Eclipse said, reaching across the table to shake the hand in greeting the beautiful blonde.
Vanessa felt an instant connection even before the handshake.
“Please, me, sit,” Eclipse said in her velvety voice. “I have ordered us some tea, I read that you enjoy the finest teas.”
“Yes, thank you I do…” Vanessa said, sitting in the chair opposite the woman who sent her the message about the disappearances.
Vanessa’s fingers wrapped loosely around a delicate violet tinted porcelain teacup. The drink within the cup was warm, rich, and laced with something that melted her thoughts like sugar in heat. Eclipse relished the control, persuading the young journalist, releasing her potent pheromones, and having the staff excitedly add pheromones to the tea in liquid honey form.
Vanessa thought she was here at the remote rooftop for an exclusive. She thought she was in control. She thought she would ask the questions.
She was wrong.
“You requested anonymity,” Vanessa began, her voice calm, professional—but softer than usual. “You said you had something regarding the disappearances.”
Madame Eclipse offered an elegant smile, one that promised secrets without revealing any. Her persuasion ability pushed lethargy, and a desire to follow. To connect.
“I have more than something, Vanessa. I have the ultimate truth. And that truth requires the proper state of mind,” Eclipse said, leaning forward, taking the left hand of the journalist with her right.
Vanessa blinked slowly. Her breath was shallow now, not from fear—but from something else. Something warm. Something pulling. In the recesses of her mind, she wanted to pull away, to get up and leave. But she couldn’t.
“You always ask the questions no one dares,” Eclipse continued, voice dipped in velvet. “That kind of curiosity is rare… and beautiful, like you...”
Vanessa shifted in her seat, her gaze becoming unfocused. She blinked hard, and tried to respond—but her thoughts floated just out of reach. The persuasion of lethargy and to follow hitting home. There was more. The scent. The voice. The tea.
“Who… are you?” she asked faintly.
“I am simply Madame,” Eclipse said, her voice melodic, layered with subtle patterns that wrapped around Vanessa’s consciousness. “And you, my dear, are tired of struggling for the truth.”
Eclipse rose slowly, stepped toward Vanessa, and brushed fingertips along the edge of her jaw, telling the newswoman, “You’ve carried the burden of truth. But the truth can be… so lonely. Half the world loves you, the other half hates you… it’s so exhausting, isn’t it, Vanessa?”
Vanessa didn’t move as Eclipse leaned closer, her presence a hypnotic weight. Their eyes locked. Pheromones, persuasion pushing obedience.
“Let me show you something better,” Eclipse whispered. “Say yes.”
“Nnnnno….,” Vanessa breathed, trying to rise to her feet.
Eclipse’s dark silver eyes shimmered in the candlelight, their depths shining softly, subtly. Her hands reached out and took those of the lovely blonde Miss Pryce. The was soothing, yet electric at the same time.
“You don’t want to go, not yet Vanessa,” Eclipse said. “We are just getting to the best part, where I give you the absolute truth, don’t you want that truth?”
“Iiiiii…..” the journalist replied softly in a whisper.
“Look into my eyes… listen to my voice, I will give you the truth you seek,” Eclipse said, her voice velvety.
Vanessa, after one last attempt to rise, fell back into her chair with a sigh. She internalized that she didn’t really want to go, not yet. There was absolute truth to be heard.
“You feel warm now. Safe. Each word you hear pulls you down further. No fear. No doubt. Just peace,” Eclipse began.
The words flow in a metered, patterned rhythm, sending the award winning journalist into hypnosis.
“Feeling more and more relaxed as you find yourself listening to my voice, allowing you to relax, to get into the right frame of mind to hear the truth…” Eclipse said.
“Sink deeper now…Let go of your thoughts,” Madame began. “You want to sink deeper, feel more of what I am providing for you, nod that you want more Vanessa…”
The persuasion, the pheromones, overwhelmed Vanessa, pupils dilated, body slackened.
Her head nodded.
“Let’s count backwards together Vanessa, as you count with me you will feel more and more relaxed every number we count,” Eclipse said. “Blink for me to tell me you understand…”
The beautiful blue eyes of Vanessa Pryce closed, her long lashes fluttering. Then she opened her eyes and found the shimmering silver eyes looking through her own.
“Five… deeper and more relaxed…” Eclipse cooed.
Vanessa blinked, then opened her eyes, and looked again into the silver eyes captivating her.
“Four… deeper, getting ready to hear the truth you are so desperate to find…”
Another blink, then opened eyes, glassier.
“Three… So relaxed now… so close to being ready to hear the absolute truth…”
A languid blink, and a slow opening of the now lidded and glassy eyes.
“Two… even deeper now, closer to the truth…”
A blink. A slow to happen opening of the hooded eyes.
“One… my voice, so important in helping you hear the truth you are desperate to seek…”
A blink, eyes that barely opened, but finding Eclipse’s silver orbs.
“Zero, so deep now, so ready to hear the absolute truth now, so deep, so relaxed, the more you try to open your eyes, the more they stay closed and the deeper you sink into this blissful relaxation my voice gives you…”
Try as she might, Vanessa could not open her eyes.
“Stop trying to open those eyes and listen to my voice, and sink deeper,” Eclipse said, voice dropping. “Let my voice carry you. My voice relaxes you, my voice gives you the truth…Say you want more, Vanessa.”
“I… want more,” she whispered, eyes closed, her head lolled forward.
“Good girl.”
Eclipse walked behind her now, voice wrapping around the edges of her mind like silk cords.
“My voice gives you the truth,” Eclipse said. “Nod if you agree…”
A slight nod, and a wide smile from the dominant.
“I am going to give you the truth soon, Vanessa,” Eclipse suggested. “Nod if you are ready to accept the truth..”
A nod, the platinum hair waving. Eclipse pushed on, her voice weaving the hypnotic commands deep into the mind of Vanessa Pryce.
“Breathe for me, Vanessa… let your thoughts float, let your questions become whispers… your mind blank and receptive to hear the truth…”
Vanessa’s breathing slowed. Her thoughts flitted away.
“You seek truth. You speak truth. That’s why the viewers listen to you. That’s why you speak so well. But truth… must evolve. Especially when it’s hidden behind a smile.”
“Now think of Solarian and Lady Veil. Polished. Perfect. Always saying they’re here to protect. But tell me, have they protected those who disappeared?”
“Nnooo..” Vanessa answered slowly.
“When you reported their failures, who defended you? Did they answer your questions? Did they fix what they promised?”
“Nnooo…” the reporter answered.
“Exactly. You searched for the truth. They hid behind silence, is that what heroes do, hide?”
“Nnooo…” Vanessa answered.
“The truth is that they are not the solution, Vanessa. They are a symbol. A myth. A mask that hides the real problem.”
Vanessa listened to the deeply layered suggestions.
“People trust them blindly. But you… you see it now. The hesitation. The discord. The failures. You’ve seen the fear they try to hide.”
“Yesss…” the journalist replied.
“The heroes are standing in the way of order…their failures are causing chaos…”
“If they are not the solution, then they are the problem.”
“Say it for me, repeat the truth: the heroes’ failures are causing chaos….”
“The heroes’ failures are causing chaos….” Vanessa itted.
Eclipse smiled, satisfied. She touched Vanessa’s temple with a single finger, letting her power pulse into the space between thought and identity.
“When I say the words ‘descend into darkness,’ your mind will return to this place—calm, open, willing...” Eclipse commanded. “Repeat that phrase back to me…”
Vanessa’s lips moved automatically. “Descend… into darkness…”
“And when I praise you, your joy will bloom. When I command you, your purpose will ignite.”
Vanessa’s breath hitched. Connect. Belong.
“When I count to three, you will awaken, feeling completely relaxed and grateful that I have given you your truth, not ing anything but us having a nice conversation,” Eclipse said. “And only you and I share this meeting, this connection for now…”
“One…”
“Two…”
“Three…”
Vanessa slowly opened her eyes and lifted her head, where she saw Eclipse. And smiled. A shiver. Goosebumps.
“Descend to darkness…”
SNAP
Without hesitation, Vanessa sunk into hypnosis. Beautiful, blonde, and deep.
Eclipse stepped forward, brushing back a lock of blonde hair from Vanessa’s face.
“When I hear you on the news,” Eclipse said softly, “I want to hear me. My words, my message, spoken in your beautiful voice.”
“Tomorrow,” Eclipse said, placing a finger under her chin, “you will go on-air and ask: Are our heroes unraveling? Can we trust them anymore? And begin to sow seeds of doubt in their abilities…you will do that. I will guide you.”
“Yess….” the young lady said.
“When you awaken, you will meeting your anonymous source and learning that the heroes’ failures are causing chaos…”
Vanessa shivered.
Eclipse placed a new communication device on the left wrist of the journalist, sliding the accompanying ear pieces in the blonde’s jacket pocket.
Eclipse took the hand of Vanessa, and gave her instructions, “You will escort me out of the building, behaving normally as I take you to your home. But each step, each moment with me will send you deeper into hypnosis, and it will be wonderful.”
Vanessa and Eclipse walked hand in hand back to Vanessa’s building, the beautiful blonde had not a care in the world, her face a mask of bliss.
“Now here is what else will happen…”
As the daily disappearances continued, Madame Eclipse continued to send Lady Veil ideas at the disappearance site. The silky thread weaving in Lady Veil’s mind included messages highlighting doubt, fear, and not being inferior. All the buttons to foster insecurity.
Solarian saw the distress the failure to connect the psychic dots had taken on Lady Veil, and he gave her space to work the leads on her own, feeling his presence just placed added pressure. But he was concerned there was more going on. While Veil worked the scene of the disappearances, he was looking for connections among the missing- but no common thread discovered.
It was 9 days and 9 disappearances and the super couple had nothing to go on to solve the case- they continued the investigative routine- Solarian took Lady Veil down the tunnel, then he left to question security personnel.
While topside questioning the entry guards, Solarian heard the call. Trouble. He communicated to alert Lady Veil of his location through their communicators, that action was being taken, and where to him. He got no reply.
Alarms wailed. Civilians scattered as a rogue exo-suit wearing villain tore through a financial district plaza, discharging arcs of volatile energy.
Solarian dropped from the sky, a comet of gold and red, landing hard enough to crack the pavement.
“Alright. Let’s shut you down before you start leveling buildings,” Solarian says in his best hero voice.
The exo-suit scanned and fired a concussive beam of compressed plasma. The hero absorbs it with a raised palm, straining, teeth gritted.
“Where is she?” Solarian asked himself.
He vaulted forward, slamming into the exo-suit with a supercharged strike. Sparks fly. The crowd cheers from behind emergency barriers as debris flies.
But Solarian’s eyes flick to his communicator.. No signal from Veil.
Far from the chaos, three stories below, Lady Veil glided through the hushed, crumbling underground tunnels where the latest disappearance occurred just under a half an hour ago.
The world there seemed quiet. Almost... staged, Lady Veil thought. She was there rapidly enough she should be able to find something.
She crouched beside a pool of strange residue on the ground. The air was laced with that same faint scent—violet and ash. But stronger. Her breath got caught. She felt a calming sense in her mind, and an excitement in her body.
Then, a wispy thread.
But there was a feeling, brushing the edge of her consciousness like silk on skin, nearly imperceptible after touching the honey like residue.
Meanwhile in his battle far across the city, Solarian stumbled back, suit cracked, arm scorched from a glancing blast. He roared and fired a solar flare blast that disabled the rogue machine’s legs.
He breathed heavily, scanning. Injured and needing Lady Veil’s attention, and assistance quell the threat. But still no Veil.
“Where the hell are you, Veil?” Solarian asks into his communicator to her, clearly frustrated.
Solarian’s comm buzzed brief static. Then silence. He turned back to the crowd, jaw clenched, unaware that his partnership may be unraveling—and a trap may already be in motion.
As the chaos unfolded, glowing monitors lined the walls—one displaying footage from the disappearances: citizens vanishing mid-step, shadows flickering unnaturally, screams caught on distant mics before static.
In the center of the room, Madame Eclipse stood before those screens, focused on one that showed Lady Veil—graceful, focused, scanning the latest vanishing point. Touching the honey.
Madame Eclipse smiled, having jammed any communications between the heroes. It was time to get close and personal with Lady Veil. The shadows hid her well, and she moved close to Veil, to begin her latest assault.
“You feel it, don’t you…? The pull… You’re closer every time.”
Eclipse raised her hand, activating a device emitting subsonic frequencies—just under conscious hearing, but precisely tuned to Lady Veil’s psychic pattern. Layered suggestions begin to imprint on repeat from the device:
“The vanishing sing to you. You can’t find them and that causes chaos…”
“You feel compelled to come back. You’ll think it’s instinct. You’ll call it an investigation.”
“Control is better than chaos…”
“Seek calm…”
Eclipse stepped back and focused in on Lady Veil—pausing, breath hitching slightly as the heroine looked toward the alley. Right on cue.
Lady Veil knelt beside a discarded scarf, continuing to scan the scene. Something felt off. Too familiar. There was no reading on the scarf, even as Veil assumed it was the latest victim’s possession. She was lost in thought for a moment after no reading from the item came to her.
Then a wisp.
Lady Veil turned sharply— nobody was there. But her breath caught for a moment. The return of a familiar scent: soft violet and smoke. Familiar in this place, but haunting. It tickled the deepest part of her psyche.
“You again…” Lady Veil says quietly, not knowing why she says it.
Behind her, a shadow curls against the wall… watching. Smiling. More layering of insecurity and doubt for the magnificent Lady Veil.
The air smelled faintly of antiseptic and scorched fabric.
Solarian, muscular and blonde, sat on the edge of a padded bench, shirtless, muscles stiff, his torso bandaged and bruised. His scorched suit lies in a heap nearby—torn, half-melted from plasma damage.
The room’s door slides open.
Lady Veil enters, her suit damp from night mist, movements deliberate. She pauses when she sees him—then walks forward quietly.
“Solarian…” Lady Veil says gently, with a hint of surprise and remorse, racing to his side.
“Three missed calls, Veil.” Solarian said as fact, voice heavy, but not angered.
She knelt beside him.
“I didn’t get them. Something’s been… off. My equipment, my focus….” Lady Veil replied. “These disappearances…”
He finally looks at her. His expression is tired, not cold.
“I almost didn’t make it. If that tech beast had pushed a little harder, there’d be a crater where I stood,” the muscular hero said.
“I know. I’m sorry,” Lady Veil replied with soft sincerity.
She reached out, fingers brushing his hand. It’s the most open she’s been in a week. “I’ll do better,” Lady Veil said quietly.
“Veil, I need you. I can’t hold this city alone,” Solarian answered gently.
She nodded, eyes searching his face, as her empathic abilities began their gentle, slow work to heal her hero husband’s wounds. Physical wounds will heal easily, but Lady Veil wondered about the emotional and mental toll that had been accumulating. On her. On him. On them.
They both turned as the television news kicked on, casting a pale glow across the room.
“This should be interesting…” Solarian said as the newscast of Vanessa Pryce played the intro music.
The studio lights dimmed to their evening hue, bathing the news desk in a soft glow. Vanessa Pryce sat poised, every hair in place, every smile meticulously crafted—but beneath the polished surface, her pulse fluttered with anticipation.
In her earpiece, a familiar voice coiled into the blonde journalist’s mind like silken thread, soft, smooth. Violet. Silver.
“You’re doing wonderfully, Vanessa,” Madame Eclipse purred, unseen yet intimately near. Physically, Eclipse was in the office of the journalist up one flight from the studio. The shadow queen had entered unseen.
Vanessa Pryce felt goosebumps at hearing that voice.
“Tonight… you get to show the world just how powerful the truth can be. My truth,” Eclipse told her compromised victim through the communication device given to the journalist the evening prior.
Vanessa’s lips curved into a subtle smile as the countdown blinked across the teleprompter.
3… 2… 1.
“Good evening, I’m Vanessa Pryce,” she said smoothly, voice even and confident. “Tonight’s top story—have our heroes’ failures caused chaos?”
A carefully edited clip played: Solarian’s latest public battle, his suit torn, exhaustion on his face. Chaotic scenes of crowds running, debris flying, injured civilians on stretchers…
The chyron below asked “Where was Lady Veil?”
In their home, Solarian angrily stood and walked off, while Lady Veil watched as if listening to something important.
“I’m going to bed… I need rest after fighting solo today…” Solarian told his wife.
“I will be there to help heal you after this segment finishes… I need to see more to formulate a response…” Lady Veil said, ever the tactician.
“Will you really be present, Celeste?” Solarian asked, using her birth name, which happened only when he was frustrated.
Lady Veil- Celeste Vale by marriage, flinched at hearing her birth name.
Vanessa turned back to the camera, her tone cool, inquisitive. “As disappearances continue daily in the city, we’re left to ask—who do we trust, who do we turn to when our protectors are cracking under the weight of their own legend?”
Behind her words, her heart raced. Vanessa could feel Eclipse in her thoughts, deep in her mind, feeding her words. Words of truth. She was terrified, somewhere in her mind, but a larger part of her being was excited at telling this truth.
The segment wrapped. The red light on the camera blinked off.
Vanessa exhaled, closing her eyes. She marched with need to be alone to her private office upstairs. She contractually wanted to be away from everyone to concentrate on her investigations, and had the floor above the studio to herself. Excited and relieved, she sat in her office at her desk.
A warmth slid over her mind like velvet. Her body tensed, then relaxed as the now-familiar scent—jasmine and desire—filled the air in her office after she lit a violet colored candle from an unopened box she instinctively knew was there.
“Well done,” Eclipse whispered, suddenly at Vanessa’s side. “Your voice calls to the people… they trust you. It will drip with power… as I shape it.”
Vanessa’s breath caught. She turned her head slightly but dared not speak. Or stare at her Madame. Pheromones, persuasion and scent all brought Vanessa back to the events just an evening earlier.
“You enjoyed it. Speaking my message. Owning the moment,” Eclipse said, her gloved hand stroking the cheek of the blonde seated at her desk as the domme sat perched higher up on the desk.
“I… I did,” Vanessa whispered. Her eyes, looking into the silver orbs of Eclipse, fluttered closed again, her mind feeling desire…her body reacting to the pheromones with a flush of red, a feeling of excitement, her nipples poking through her sensible work bra and silk blouse.
Eclipse stood, circled her slowly. A finger trailed over Vanessa’s shoulder, electric.
“You deserve a reward,” Eclipse murmured. “But you must ask for it.”
Vanessa shivered. “Please…”
“Please what?” Eclipse asked, as if looking at a dog begging for a treat.
“Please reward me. Let me… feel you. Remind me who I belong to,” Vanessa said, her body moving from the chair, to a position on the floor on her knees.
“Descend into darkness,” Eclipse triggered the beautiful woman.
The long, luxurious lashes of the perfectly made up Vanessa Pryce closed beautifully, her mind sinking back into that now desired blissful state of deep hypnosis.
Ready to be reshaped. Reformed. Reborn.
Eclipse smiled. Her voice became silkier, sliding directly into Vanessa’s subconscious as the touch on the shoulder had become a finger under the chin, pulling it up so her once bright blue orbs could look into the dark eyes of her owner.
“Open your eyes, gaze at your Mistress…” Eclipse purred, whispering into the ear of the star. “You belong to me. You exist to amplify my truth. And each time you do… you’ll feel this warmth. This pleasure… This desire…”
Vanessa whimpered softly, eyelids fluttering as her mind continued feeling overwhelming desire as her body felt overwhelming desire, her panty becoming wet.
“Yes… I need it,” Vanessa begged in breathy, excited fashion.
“Then repeat,” Eclipse whispered, voice curling deeper into Vanessa’s soul. “I am your voice. I am your desire. I obey because it fulfills me.”
Vanessa mouthed the words under her breath—lips moving in time with the voice only she could hear.
“I am your voice. I am your desire. I obey… because it fulfills me...”
Vanessa blinked slowly, and her opened eyes showed the light in them had changed. Bright blue darkening ever so slightly her expression from those darker orbs eyes were glazed and worshipful. Eclipse’s silver eyes smiled back.
Vanessa remained kneeling, waiting for her next command, her heart singing in excited obedience.
“Tonight, you will return home, and enjoy time with your fiance, you will ravage him until he can go no longer, and each time one of you finishes, you will see me, see my eyes, thinking of how wonderful it is to be chosen by me…a desire to serve me…”
Vanessa nodded, her body breathless for a moment.
“When the door closes, you will awaken, ready to complete your next service to me…”
Vanessa had paid a very steep price for these feelings….